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for Unforeseen Obstacles

by Xakana

person Snowfall
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Gah! That was too awesome. Ooh, Ooh. Can't wait for a reeeaally long lime or lemon. You're such a tease, wench!

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Snowfall
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL Miroku gets what he gives and by Sess no less! That was priceless. I loved how you had Sess keep repeating 'Perhaps'. Good one. Mmmm. I guess Inu felt so good about the change in his and Kag's relationship that he now feels more responsible for the group, ne? Aw, shoot. I was hoping Tensaiga could take care of that beasty. Thanks for answering the question. Loved the chappie. Thanks for the quick update.

Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
person Rawben
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, miroku's losin it! cracks me up... hehe... anyhow, yeah... good chapter and all that. ;) seemed short, but i can't complain... at least you posted! yey for updates! but i'm confused, is sess falling for miroku? what about sango? :O
person Rawben
schedule July 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story! i'm interested to see how you will have both mir/san and sess/mir, w/o hurting sango... ;) anyhow, i'm loving it! update soon! ;)
person Dante
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah poor Miroku...what am I saying?! The perv deserves getting the tables turned on him.

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schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
These last few chapters were great. I loved the part where Miroku kissed Sesshoumaru to calm him down. I almost fell out of my chair, when Miroku was the one getting his butt groped. That was priceless!! ^_^
person bob
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay its updated!! i luv this story i can't wait until they finally get together
person Snowfall
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story. You've written it well and haven't jumped right into a sexual interlude. Miroku's survival tactic was quite amusing. I find this fic intriguing. It's sweet that you've added Inuyasha declaring his love for Kagome. I find it funny that Sesshoumrau and Inu's pack are following the same path. Mmm. If the dead belong to that creature, couldn't Sess have just used Tensaiga to release the dead and send the demon back to the nether world?

Well, I hope you update soon.

Snowfall
person bob
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay you updated i expected to be waiting for weeks but yay no cliffhanger! i especially liked the last paragraph because it was decribed beautifully, can't wait to read more!!
person Tally
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Continue it soon please! I really like this story. And I love the pairing.. But I can never find a good fanfiction of it! D= If you have any good links to any, please e-mail them to me! ^^