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Ahh! Lovely, my dear! What a cliffhanger! I like your decision on saving what you wrote or ideas for your next story. Which tickles me pink because that implies that you'll be writing another story. Whoo-hoo! And I cannot -wait- until the next chapter is released for this one. It really is fabulous writing, very well-done. You've kept everyone in character well even though it's an AU piece, which I love. I can only tolerate so much fluffiness before I get turned off (not in the sexual sense) and stop reading the story or mentally change the dialogue. Anyway, I love what you've done and continue to do. Please keep it up. One hot chapter and story deserves another!

InkiKokoro

so when are you going to e-mail me and do you still have the story i sent you???

Hooooly Shiiiiit!!!!

That was the hottest thing ever... I cant believe you stoped at the best part!!
omg.... wow..... I cant wait till the next chapter!!

Wow...I mean...yeah, just wow. Man, do I need a cold shower! Very, very hot--very nicely done! Please tell me you're going to update soon! I'm dying to see how this will play out! Keep up the good work!

Yaoi! We want yaoi! We want Yaoi! We want yaoi! To hell with the people who are queasy or whatever! Mark the yaoi parts so they can scroll down! Just post the story! Please! Yaoi would be so great! Next week!??? Outrage!! Just send it to me and have no cold feet cause I'm salvitating over it now! And thanks for the reveiw by the way. Beacon of joy to my cold writer's cave.

you could post two chapters.. one with the yaoi and one without it o_O

My personal opinion is that I love Naraku and Sesshoumaru, they make one of the best couplings out there. And throwing a bit of Sango in there is just peachy. There really aren't enough Sango/anything (especially Naraku and Sesshoumaru, which are my favourites) out there, and certainly the Sess/San/Nar are rarer than a Dinosaur. I know yaoi isn't everyone's cup of tea, but in all honesty, they don't have to read it. You're writing the fic and should be doing so because you enjoy it. You might not always appeal to the masses, but that's life and the different path is not always loved by all. Anywho, my opinion is that I'd like you to publish what had originally intended to publish. Changing your story because people just might not be comfortable with it (though I'm not quite sure what they're doing reading BDSM fics) is not always best, it might end up lacking the honesty and earnest it once held. So, yes. I'd love for you to include Sess-y/Naraku fun, but if *you* don't want to then don't.

OR an interesting idea would be to post the original and altered version and letting the audiance choose which one they'd like to read and carry the story on from there.

Love your story and like EatAPeach, I'm here to back you up where ever this story takes you...
Inki

r u crazy!? you absolutely must continue this fic. i don't think i've read anything like it before.(sango/sess/nar) major turn on! very well written, too. good grammer and spelling always helps with the flow of the story. good "job". ^__^

Please update. Your story is awesome, and so wonderfully erotic.
JMarie

please don't include homosexual behavior, if you want to do a homosexual story, then do it on another one, this story has been mostly based on sango and it would be weird to change the topic all of a sudden.