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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a most excellent lemon. There is just one point of conflict here, however. In chapter one, you had Sesshoumaru bind Sango's hands behind her with the leash attached to her collar. By the end of the second chapter, you have her being laid flat of her back, 'spread eagle' on a table, and at one point grabbing Naraku with her hands. This would be fine, except at no point during the second chapter do you have her hands unbound so that she can do all of this. While very good in the imagery department, the acts are not quite possible.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, yummy! I've never read a more twisted coupling than this and I like it.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
like it a lot! update soon, will the sandwich be made soon?
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you must update this.
please update soon.
please update soon.
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January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow...
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What I wouldnt give to trade places with Sango..... Please continue this story, its great! PWP rules! ^_^
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
U MUST UPDATE!!!! PLEASE! u left us at a cliff hanger u kno....
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December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is pretty good! Poor Sango... she just can't get a break can she? please update soon! 10/10 ^.^! --Judo
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Twisted but nice.
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
By the way. I thought this was supposed to be a Sango/Sesshoubaru fic?