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for Lessons In Lust

by OriginalSinner

person Anon
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hot just a little too hot for work reading!! keep writting more!!
person angel
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow that was awesome ... please please please please update soon i would love to read more ... later for now

angel
person YoukaiFate
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I think I just had as many mental orgasms as Sango had in this chapter. Hot and holy fart! I am needing a cold icy cold freezing cold icy shower right now...or about five seconds with Sango's pink vibrator. Sinner, when you write a lemon, you write a LEMON!

Please gods above and below, update SOON!

Fate
person Jill445
schedule August 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great chapter! When's the next one coming out? you were on a role for a while, and now it just suddenly stopped, hope you havent give up this story, or have a writers block, this story rocks!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person Atropa
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You know... that idea of yours... keeping a helmet on... that's not a bad idea.... *sits on her knees trying to form coherent words...*
person Anon
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Man sesshy is an animal. He better keep himself in check he will end you doing something awful. Funny Naraku is acting sweeter than Sesshy.
person jem89
schedule July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story and ch.5 is great! why does Sango get hurt though? You'd think Sess would know when to stop so she doesn't get knotted. Anyways, Please update soon :)
person EatAPeach
schedule July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Fans self frantically* OH. MY. GOD. That was just too hot for words...very, VERY nicely done. I can only imagine where you plan on taking this, and I can barely wait!! Thanks for the shoutout, girl! One of these days I am going to get off my ass and finish that story I have started for you. What can I say? I*m no speed demon. :) Anyway, great work! I*ll be looking forward to more!!

Peace,
Peachy
person Kira Rose
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please up date soon its one of my favorite story's on here
person Chigirl
schedule July 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First of all... Great Title! Secondly, guurrll you done did it again!!! Wow I,m happy to see Sango's being a little bit of a bad girl. I think she couldn't have gotten a better spanking either. You know the kind of spanking you get when you're good and naughty. I think Sesshou-baby is handling her punishment quite well. So does this mean their lovely little Taijiya will be a lovely big Taijiya, in say about 9 months? That's why canine swell after all. And will the dark prince finally get his turn? God, I'd love to be Sango right bout now! I think the story is paced just perfectly! If Sessh suddenly offered himself to Naraku, it would be too out of character. I like the way your easing into it. Goodness that sounded dirty. I'm sure your yaoi will be as sensual and heart pounding as everything else you write. Just don't take too long writing it!!! The little hentais' in training are waiting to be taught.

Update soon
Chigirl

P.S. Have you ever read the fic Layers. Well it's a whole series actually. Plenty of yaoi, Inu/Mir Sess/San, Kou/Kag, Shi/Rin. It's written by Macx and Lara Bee. Very well written, and totally worth your time. And I don't even read M/M! But I do now! Check it out, if you haven't already, but I'm sure a hot and heavy hentai godess like you knows all about it.*LOL*

Oh, and thanks for the Shout Out babe!!!! Weeping!(cracks up laughing) Thats classic*LOL*