rate_review Reviews

Hhhhhh, I will just like to say that you have done a great job in being very detail, I could almost picture that provocative outfit Sango design for herself. It must suck being just a human when there are demons who could read your ever emotion and then use it against you. I can also identify with Sango on not knowing what it will felt like to ejaculate, at lease now she can say she had experience it {evil eye of jealousy}. The next chapter was truly a lesson, funny beyond comprehension, I have to say. OriginalSinner, you are such a sluty writer, I love it...plz don't stop. Naraku, that bastard...my goodness, he can tease me with that tongue any day...and you know that I am in love with fluffy. Sesshoumaru is so hardcore {give it to me master Sess-sama}. Plz continual with the lush, I need to be punish {throwing head back, panting uncontrollably}. {"More, more... faster... faster... harder damn it!" **Snickers***}

Wonderful naughty stuff....every girls fantasy! You're a really good writer to boot. Thank You. I'm happy.

Whoa, dang makes you wish you were her. Plus it gave me some thoughts that will last me a long, long time. Keep up the great work i will be waiting, impatiently, for the next chapter.

*pants uncontrollably*

I so wish that I was Sango while reading chapter 2!
Whoooo that was HOT HOT HOT!

To hot for words!!! Please update soon. And whens the new chapter of What Now coming up? Soon I hope. Please keep up the good work and update soon.

Chigirl

Woah...that was intense! God, I need a cold shower! Keep it up, that was awesome and I can't wait to read more!

Wouldn't this be considered rape? She is saying stop
and when someone says stop to sexual behavior they
do not want to endure then that's rape. Just giving you
a hard time for a sec, but yeah this is good, maybe a little
too kinky considering the vibrator, I don't like those things
(eewww, lol); maybe instead of Sango being taught another
lesson, she gets the real thing instead with of course (hopefully)
the bite mark at the end with the whole mating process! CYA

Yes, though I have to mention I almost dropped this story in the can when it seemed as if it was getting reallly heavy into pain. Just mentioning. But, god yes, write more, or I'll take some serious piss out of you! you know, that sounded weird.

?? Do we ???
Of course we do...!! I need to have something to survive this blasted summerheat with. Ehhh, now that's a bit wrong... because today is not so hot and I still feel like i'm in a fucking sauna... *s*
Go head write more, more... more I tell ya!!

OMG!! *wails* I so thought you updated. I got the chair ready this time, put plastic wrap on it, strapped myself in. Eagerly went to read, and haha it was an authors note!! *Un-straps from chair, pulls plastic off* Seriously this is a great, erotically hot story. I cannot wait to see more of this. Sesshoumaru and Naraku are just beyond hot!! Please write more!!