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for Lessons In Lust

by OriginalSinner

person Daewyn
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update update update update update update!
You must update!
...please?
This is one of the best fics I've read in a while, you must finish it! ...soon...
person Anon
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
so fucking hot! I wish i was was her it is all i want for my birthday! Keep writting!
person SchizoxPsycho
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O__<

you are literally going to kill me!!! When I saw that this story was 'updated' I was sooo happy and its just an A/N!!!

arggh.... ook so I'll wait some more... It seems to me that all the stories that I want so desperatly to be updated are on a hiatus...

I'll keep waiting though... its not like I have a choice
person Shai
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh cool! That's tomorrow!
person Anon
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hot fucking hot but let sango make the boys play together!!
person Leila
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a perfect threesome! lucky sango... please you MUST update! there arent many good dominating fics on this site, especially ones that include naraku and sesshomaru! UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE!!
person Tiggergirl
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What is that, what is going on here in the chapter I mean.It's my turn to play......how can u end it like that I nearly had a heartattack. Please tell me u have more 2 right? tell me and make it longer this time with more action and torture but dont shame her, if it was Kagome, but not Sango I like Sango ok?
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Slides off chair for the 5th time* Good gawd!! Such kinky hotness!! Talk about being hot.!! Wahooooo!! Wows!! This was a wonderful chapter! I loved Sango's answer for having the vibrator, that was priceless!! Damn Naraku is soooooo freaking hot in this. Its so good to see him being so sexual!! *fans self* Ohhs that finger sucking between the two boys.. I slid so quick, I went half way across the room! You have inspired me to do a 3-some one-shot now!

Your writing is wonderful, I could see *at times feel* everything that was going on! Great job with the descriptions, just everything! Please continue on with this! I know I would love to see more 'lessons' !
person happybum
schedule July 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! That was Beyong HOT!! If a person's body was capable of spontaneously combusting I would be a great ball of fire. i don't think i will look or taste as good as bbq..in plain english PLEASE UPDATE *bows down and worship* o"h mighty smutty being"..=]
person Rawben
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:O that was great. daaaamn. yes. more lessons! lol! poor sango! ...and yet, in the back of my mind all i can think about is exactly what time it is... i guess they have 4 hours till the party, but after they get done... i wouldnt be able to go! poor girl! she'll have to take another shower...fix her hair... her clothes are a mess... man, i'm entirely too practical if this is all i can think about... :P lol...