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for To Be The Alpha

by Ilana

person Inukagsess7
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great story keep it up upate soon please!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Cac
schedule August 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOD! WHEN DID the new chapter come out!!! I mised it! can't wait for more!!!!!
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Ashley
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter as always lol. Update soon!
person Neko_Baby
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow I LOVE this story! You MUST update...PLLLLLEEEEAAASSSEEEE HUURRRYYYY WITH THE UPDATE!!!
person ktakn
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
excelente!!!!!!!!!! genial capitulo!!!

por favor kontinua!!!!

person Anon
schedule August 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like it
person Anne
schedule July 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story, but there was one thing that bothered me at the end. Kagome said twelve days of the year she was submissive, but there are thirteen lunar cycles to a year. One month a year there are two full moons, the second of which is called a "blue moon," and correspondingly there is one month a year where there are two new moons. The western calendar is a solar calendar, following the movements of the sun, but the Chinese calendar and some other calendars are lunar calendars, having thirteen months to the year. *Gets off of soapbox* Feel free to ignore me, but that was the one jarring note to an otherwise lovely PWP. I'm looking forward to seeing what happens in the sequel.
person Cac
schedule July 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice twist with who the alpha turns out to be! And so hot... And to that last A/N, YES, and I'm going to be really cranky if I have to wait fot september! Oh wait, maybe the A/N is old, like last year? Probably no such luck...
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?