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December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY YOU REALLY NEED TO UPDATE THIS STORY IS SO FRIGGIN GOOD I LOVE IT UPDATE UPDATE UDPATE UPDATE PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ IM BEGGIN YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!111
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December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That story was pretty good. Maybe make Inuyasha the alpha and get sesshomaru out of the picture! All he wants to do is fuck Kagome!
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October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hottness
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October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please update soon T_T cant wait to read more T_T
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, yay! I'm so glad you decided to write more chapters ^_^. You know, this could easily turn into a story with more that 3 chapters if you wanted it to; it could explore the relationships further. Just a thought.
You're a very talented writer, and I really liked seeing someone actually make an effort to keep Sesshoumaru in-character. Even I have a hard time writing him in-character.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you post it soon!
- NSA
You're a very talented writer, and I really liked seeing someone actually make an effort to keep Sesshoumaru in-character. Even I have a hard time writing him in-character.
Anyway, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope you post it soon!
- NSA
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was suprised, and a little curious, when I read the summary of your story. I think it's a great plot and has a lot of twists that the reader dosen't expect. I read the first chapter and really liked it a lot. But, the second chapter I don't like as much. I think you should have left it as a one-shot, and posted the 2nd chapter as a sequel. I want to see where you take this story though. Great work on an outstanding peice of fiction.
Kito.
Kito.
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW OMG that was...was...i can't describe it...it was just WOW
i cant wait to see inuyasha's reaction to sesshy's being a bad puppy and hurting hagome
and one more thing are we going to be seeing any puppies??? and where is rin during all this???
i cant wait to see inuyasha's reaction to sesshy's being a bad puppy and hurting hagome
and one more thing are we going to be seeing any puppies??? and where is rin during all this???
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August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really how many times does it take to edit two chapters? You had two chapters for awhile, yet it is constantly being pushed up front. No one spells that bad, sorry. Think me an asshole all you want but you are being a review whore. You are pushing other works down just to keep yours up front.
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August 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?