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for Fire Between Worlds

by Roushijin

person doll17
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow that chapter was great can't wait to read the next one keep up the good work.
person Dream_Toxin
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It didn't totally suck and maybe it could use some work but all in all this is still starting to get to be one of me fav stories. Update when u can!
person Ren
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Tee hee hee, it didn't 'suck' okay? -_-' If you say it's a little undesciptive is better...now where was I, oh yes, I liked the chapter either way though, tee hee hee, ^+^ keep up the great work, I want to know what the prize will be...hmmm...knowing Sesshoumaru, might be something either weird, or something really insane..^+^ I don't know, it's my guess...please update again some time!!! ^+^ Keep up your great work, I'm still here!!! Waiting that is!
person Cac
schedule August 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh I don't know... I thought it was okay. So glad you updated! But three weeks!!!!!!!! You're KIDDING me!!! Me want hot Sesshy/Rin chapter SOON!!! Damn...
person Dream Toxin
schedule August 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Update! Update! As soon as u finish the chapter that will recieve ur approval and I know it will be good! Oh, where did u get an idea for a game like that? It was genius, I have never heard a version like that before!
person Cac
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Chapter 1: wow this looks so good! Until later, onto chappie 2 (I can't believe I said chappie I never say chappie you said chappie I bet didn't you at the end of chapter 1 so it's stuck in my head. I'm just sure of it. Hmph.
person Cac
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still not caught up by the way, just dropping in to say sweetie, you need an editor. I'd be happy to volunteer thogh I won't say I'm like superb but I sure spot mistakes when reading so it's different then if you're writing youknow.
person Cac
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aaaghhhhh!!!!!!!! You're going to have to do a lot better than THAT to stem my incredible rage!!! (snaps chair over knee and claws face) WRITE!! MORE!!! NOW!! SOON!! (pulls out hair). Okay. I'm calmer now. This is going on my rec reading.
person Ren
schedule August 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice chaps. Continue again soon please, I'll be happily waiting for your next update...grrr, it took so LONG!!! Oh wells though, great work, keep it up and I'll still be here
person Mmoirai
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just read your story again and I still can't wait for the next chapter! Is she going to have to grab his butt in the middle of an agrument?! Please continue!