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for Fire Between Worlds

by Roushijin

schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a cool ending. I just started on a fic of my own. How about you write another one. Maybe reversing the angle. Or you could always.... Nah. I'll use that one myself.
person darkLady
schedule October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue on this one! even if its just a oneshot!
person cac
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ya know it's a good chapter szo why should I have to tell ya? Ha, bloody fantastic anyway.
person Ren
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Pretty good for a beginner, hee hee, well I hope you make another Sess/Rin story soon, I'll be glad to update. ^+^ Wish you the best of luck in school!! ^_^
person diego
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good ...and it to bad .. that it the end
person Emily
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is such a great story, and so funny. I LOVE IT. I can't wait for the next chapter. If you need any Ideas, Email me. I'm still trying to figure out a few things for my story so I'll be glad to help any way I can.
person animepunk93
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you don't know how much i hate you damn evil cliffy i say take this opportunity to right a lemon

~animepunk93
person Cac
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah I noticed you didn't have any other stories posted, cause if so they would have had to have been either necropheliac, rape, incest or beastiality to keep me from reading them...

Yes! Yes, put a lemon in the next chapter. If you want to live. Sorry, can't offer much advice, I luv the story so much so far so I figure you'll do okay to great
person Emi
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
me=honest... I LOVE IT! UPDATE SOON OR FACE THE RATH OF MY SPOON THROWING! (jk)
person diego
schedule August 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
damn it ...no way ....I whant the next chapter it damn godd ...c ant wait.... o and by the way ...a beat you a did more than 5 hours of swimming ...I just add to say .... geep going your story is great