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February 21, 2008 at 12:00 AM
In a word, YUM. Well written, poetic, and hot. I love the premise and follow-through. The only constructive criticism I can think of is that "sweet one" as a pet name is said perhaps a few times too often. I might also like to see Inuyasha's relatively smaller size referenced once or twice, enhancing the Top/bottom energy, the big brother/little brother element. Again, gorgeous, beautiful, yummy.
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February 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww, so cute. I love this. Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are adorable. I'm sad its ended.
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August 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
::wipes away tear:: Wow. That was lovely. Extremely so. I'm glad I ran across this fic. I'd love to read more of your work. ^^
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May 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
passion is next right. looking forward to it.
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February 26, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This is intense stuff! I cant wait to read more.
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
an author with a deep poetic streak. i truly appreciate it.
AU? well, no kagome, no naraku? (this is fine with me)
good. a different kind of fic i guess, and one i shall look forward to reading,,,
thank you for sharing
AU? well, no kagome, no naraku? (this is fine with me)
good. a different kind of fic i guess, and one i shall look forward to reading,,,
thank you for sharing
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
~ Very well written. The surrealism is reminiscent of the early odes of Sappho. Even though the story itself is not an ode in it’s truest since, it utilizies a form of stately and elaborate lyrical verse which allows it to break away from the standard written form of a story, to become the poetic song of love that is shared between the two characters. I can’t wait to read more ~
Cheers Bella
Cheers Bella
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February 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
o.O *fans self* i want to know where you learned to write...*shudders* i wish i could write like that...where did you find the poems at?
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Prologue: O...M...G. I cannot describe this feelings provoked and the how heavily it weighs in my very bones. So beautifully written, so melancholy. I did not read the summary, so I hope that this does not end with madness.
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
Snowfall aka Hanyou Slave
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August 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Chapter two and three: So sweet, so peaceful and touching. And...*sniffle*..."Help release me from my own chains…help me love you…" so romantic. You do it so well.