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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.1) Very Good! I like your senerio, two brothers no less giving chase to one female. Boy, I can't wait to read the rest. Peace!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2) Ineresting, changing her. Liking it so far. Your writing is very clear and I'm able to visualize situations you've created. Peace
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.3) Well not that she lost the battle.... Oh well, I love the way you changed some parts. Very Good! I can't wait to review the rest, but I must turn to my reality and go to work. But I shall readin more of your wonderful story! Peace!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.7) AWWW! Kouga! I Love him too! Just going to read on, You are going to give me a Citrus Attack! I am so loving this story!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.8) Loving this, Loving this, Loving this! Very graphic your writing is. I'm going to continue tomorrow, kind of tired now, Had a long day, but couldn't wait to get to this story! Until then Peace!
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October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh great chapter! and now for inu! he needs his turn! ;)
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh t'was but a dream come true to have read this the two brothers together like that is the same fanfic and....... >:D like that ohhhhh soooo yummy thank you for writing this fanfic, it relly has been a pleasure reading thusfar and i shall continue reading heh heh heh >:) bye byes:):D