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by chanda

person Inu Hanyou Nikkie
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Okay.. My interest is being piqued again. I read the latest chapter. I am currently wondering what punishment Kagome will give Sesshoumaru and then what punishment she'll give both after learning of the bet. I will be awaiting the next chapter. Thanks.
person BastardOmega
schedule February 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOVED IT, UPDATE... DID I FORGET ANYTHING, NOPE.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Kat
schedule February 5, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the chappy!!! Please continue!!
person Inu Hanyou Nikkie
schedule January 29, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I guess I was really enjoying this story with the brothers being equal with Kagome until the two/three recent chapters... now it has turned more towards a Sess/Kag story with Inuyasha being "tossed" aside with only token "cameo appearances" with Kagome. Sighs.. Sesshoumaru definitely is a huge dishonourable who has no value upon his word of honour. To say to Kagome "what have you done to get him(Inuyasha).." really was awful... pinning the blame for Inuyasha's state on Kagome when it was he who broke his promise to leave Inu and Kag alone that night and shoving his brother out. I guess I would have liked to known/been warned before I read those chapters that it was becoming a Sess/Kag story so I could have stopped following the story. So yeah.. Your story up until then was very good and hot and was enjoyable. I guess I'm disappointed..
person BastardOmega
schedule January 25, 2007 at 12:00 AM
IIIIIIII LOVED IT. I just finished reading the 21 chapter*I started yesterday*. Don't leave Inu like he is now, poor thing, and give him a thump on the head for getting drunk from me. Plezzz update soon, I'll be looking forward to it. PS: Don't forget 'stranded' I think it's a work of art.

Peace & Love BastardOmega
person Megan Consoer
schedule January 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
person Lady
schedule June 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this story. This story has everything in it that a good story needs. I truly think that you are a wonderful author.
person ScarletLover
schedule June 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM


Why haven't you updated in so long? Are you having a writers block if so I could probably give you some Ideas
person TAJE
schedule January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ch. 15) I love this chapter! I'm loving this whole story. I love the fight scene. Yes Kagome needs to be trained in both her powers. I love the way Miroku came into the picture. I can't wait to read the rest!