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for Turnabout

by blacknoise

person kiotana
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome! more helpless sesshomaru fics!
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Heh. Nice. =]
person stolendreamer
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This was really good. I don't know why but this was not what I expected at all- in fact I was impressed with how InuYasha was able to defeat Sesshoumaru in that way. Great job!
person Onyxlight
schedule August 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
“You heard me. Beg.”
That was priceless Inu if I've ever read it before!!
Loved it!!

Very well done for a one shot, had a plot (I have issues with out and out PWP) and it was quite
the entertaining read!!
person lilmab207
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Why did they have each other at the end anyways Kirara was cute.
person blacknoise
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To the previous reviewer: I can only assume you meant why did they *leave* each other at the end. I was hoping that'd be obvious. In this fic, Inuyasha and Sesshoumaru are anything but in love. Sesshoumaru's cultivated a bit of an unhealthy obsession with his brother, partly due to Inuyasha's strong odour (he's oozing pheromones), and partly due to their dysfunctional relationship. Inuyasha's just jonesing to get laid. That's all.

Sesshoumaru leaves in the end because, in this fic, it's actually *him* that succumbs to temptation, not Inuyasha. Inuyasha used the opportunity to get his rocks off, but in the process, he all but forced Sesshoumaru to confess that he wanted him. Sesshoumaru's backed into a corner, and he doesn't like that one bit. He has no tender feelings for Inuyasha, just desire. It embarrasses and shames him to no end that he's let that information slip to Inuyasha.

They leave because it's a question of dignity. Inuyasha's blueballs are taken care of; he can go back to spending time with Kagome without being driven mad for want of intimacy (at least for a while). Sesshoumaru's finally gotten a taste of his forbidden desire, though he's lost a lot of face in the process. Sesshoumaru's trying to preserve as much dignity as he has left, and Inuyasha has no real interest in any sort of relationship with him. Actually, neither of them are capable of/ willing to pursue any kind of emotional connection whatsoever.
person Polka dot
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mwauauahauahuha Inuyasha has hand, so great
person rawben
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! that was great! i loved it! ;) and it ended well too! altho i bet you could do a good continuation on that! do it! more chapters!
person lere
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Just one word: PERFECT! One of the few best Inu/sess I ever read! Why?

1. I don't like a winppering Inu moaning: "Aniki, please... I love you! Take me! Take me!!! Ohhhh....". It's stupidy! In the serie he is a though hanyou with a foul mouth who would never be a sub to anyone, last Sesshomaru.

2. Sesshomaru is very doubious. And you made a great work exploring that. He was acting like an alpha male but in the end he was begging. Great!!!! Take that Great Lord!

3. Inu turned the table!!!! It's was the best part.

I think you were very faithful to the original characters. I imagine that if the serie was yaoi the two would be just like that. They don't love each other and I think the hate Sess feed for inuyasha is about who is the best between them, just like real dogs, hehe.
Wonderful job! I would like to read more fantastic fics like this.

Big hugs from Brazil,

Lere
person T
schedule July 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS AWESOME. I love the descriptions that you use, and how Sesshoumaru was still in character despite what happened...lol a Turnabout indeed, If they had ratings on this thing, I'd give you a 10 in EVERY aspect..Good freakin job! ^^