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Omg! I can't believe I hadn't discovered this little jewel of a story before! *shakes finger at you* Shame on you for hiding this from me! lmao And here I am thinking I've seen the best, and you totally go and blow me away with "Tortured Love"! How are we mere mortals supposed to compete with that?! Awe my friend, complete awe! That's right, I Nightscare am in complete stupified awe. Should I get on my knees and bow now, or later? lol Keep up the excellent work. Geez, and after reading a gem like that, I STILL have to come up with something interesting for the next chapter of Dark Destiny. *shakes head and mumbles something about you taking all the good ideas* hehehe, you know I love ya! See ya on a Single Spark!

hey this is an awesome story. I've been waiting for a story like this. I hope you continue to update it so I can learn how is ends. Hopefully all ends well

Chapter 8-Ohh and the saga continues. Wows Naraku really is getting into Inuyasha’s mind. He is one smart and cunning, evil assed hottie! Everyone is slowly falling around Inuyasha. His pride is hurt in more ways than one. First his brother, now his friends falling!! Another great chapter!!

Chapter 7-Oh I do feel sorry for Inuyasha and what he had to face. Then seeing Kagome lean into Sesshoumaru and taking comfort from him. Naraku really is a smart- hot assed hanyou. Oh good I still have another chapter to read!! Lovely writing once again!!

You are truly a gifted writer. I felt so bad for the characters though...and even with your Warning...I was really shocked and appalled and amazed by your creative and unique style of writing!

And here I thought that this fic was just an excuse for rampant lemons...should I even be surprised that you'd turn the plot on its head and include Naraku's plan for full-blown destruction of the Inu-tachi? Gracious lord, Rin! Now, I'm not just addicted to the intensely erotic scenes in the deep, dark dungeons, but I'm also caught up in Naraku's plot. What, exactly, is he designing here? True, Kagome's torture would inflict pain on Inuyasha and the others, but I never guessed he'd also purposefully go after them like he did in this chapter. Geez, this fic is dark, and boy do I adore every word of it! Fab stuff, as always. I'm such a fan of yours. Gonna make t-shirts. I swear.

cool, Ill be waiting

hiro

No, dear, you don't need to apologize for the moon thing, you need to fix it and stop confusing your readers.

I hate to admit, it's a turn on. You're a dam good writer.

That moon thing confused me too and if you hadn't said anything in your story I never would have realized you meant days instead of months. A moon is a month, not a day.

I've never seen anyone except you refer to a day as a moon. In everything I have ever read (the most recent being the Clan of the Cave Bear books) where people were primitive and didn't have calenders or clocks they always refer to a month as a moon. When they say a moon they mean the amount of time it takes for the moon to go through one full cycle.

Other than that it was good, although I would have liked to see more Naraku/Sesshomaru action. It was still good without it.