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for Tortured Love

by Rinseternalsoul

person Xanthe
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent! I love your take on these two. I was wondering though, will Kagome visit her family or wait 'til Naraku's gone?
person FayeMegan
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
horray! The long awaited update!! Great chapter! theres so much more to come.. yey.. this story is awesome in every aspect! Can't wait for more.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do so love this fic...but, did you really have to end the last chapter right after a lemon? *pouts* Soooo sad. I wanted to read more. I have been waiting for an update, you know.

Excellent fic you have here. I hope Naraku dies a slow and painful death, I really do.
person hiro
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was very good and im glad you updated, but you need to go back and rewrite a little. Dont take this the wrong way, but I belive that there is something missing and also that you are talented enough to find out and make it right. Keep going and I patiently await another chapter.
person SilentDeath
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Does a stupid dance while singing badly* "Go Rin, its your birthday....," LOL. Loved it my dear. As always. I am depressed again. I really wanted to use the sone Closer for one of the club songs in The Arrangement. Now I have to find another song. KougasAngel beat me to it. Owell, back to the drawing board. I have a friend working on what I should put in the bondage club. She has helped my discover such fun toys. I will be having some fun in this one. I am so bad. Good writing my dear, Keep up the good work!
person kitsune_youkai_jade
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HEY THANKS FOR UPDATING!!! LOVED IT HOPE IT HAS MORE LEMONS THAT ARE LONGER IN IT!! ^_^
person Princess
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG I'm so scared now. I was so scared when I read the first chapter, but I couldn't stop myself from clicking "next chapter" and reading what happens next! 0_0
person amanda
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your storie. I can't wait to read the next chapter.
person Susanne
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this is so hot! I can't wait for the next update *drools*