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I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

Love it.

It was very well written.

Can't wait to read more.

Update soon!

*Overheats and collapses* Ohhs to be boinked by Sesshoumaru. Mmm so yummy! That was quite HOT!! Naraku was being so Naraku-ey watching Inuyasha's hurt and pain. Good gawd the dark hottie was getting off and watching at the same. Such a hot conniving bastard. The fight scenes were wonderful, those are so hard to write yet you do such a good job with them.---*GASP* My dark hottie!! *Wails and pulls tissue from bra to wipe eyes* I know he had to die. --*Sniff* Ohhs only more chapter? Aww! Thank you for the kind words!! Another great, hot and intense chapter from you!! This is a amazing story!

I Really love your story, You have to update it soon.

*breathes deeply* Okay, cooled down, now I can review.
I came across this by accident but when I saw your name I thought I had to have at least a look at it. Okay, there was a warning and I was a bit wary because as a rule I don't like dark fics. But there's an exception to every rule and this fic is mine.
Brilliantly done. Really. Naraku is such an evil, so very much like him. I bet there's a lot of these little games of his going on behind the show. I'm just too curious to know what was his original plan. Hurting Inu Yasha, fine, yes, and getting shards. And what about these little hints at the end of last chapter? Ah, well, I have to be patient I guess.
The lemon scenes were great. Even the dark ones. You gave enough details to make it convincing but too little to make it disgusting or frightening. That one scene were Kagura 'plays' a little was damn hot. Especially the part with her shagging Sess while he stares at Kagome ... *fans herself*But of course I liked the ones with only Sess and Kag better. Especially the 'berry-lemon'. ^-^ And I'd really like to know why she affects him so and why he affects her so. Anything myserious or just plain psychology? Whatever it is, I like it. A lot. Now I'm thinking about the categories in which I can this fic possibly nominate in the third quarter voting of the Inu Yasha Fan Guilt.
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LOve it love it you must finish this its getting great........

yay, wonderful chapter. Stupid little shadow demon trying to seduce Sesshoumaru. grrr, that's not right he belongs to Kagome now. Hehe, can't wait for the next chapter. Hope Naraku gets what he deserves.

wow. really...wow. so well written and a real great plot. man...i want Naraku dead. i say that to a lot of stories (and half of the time to the series) but i demand his head on a stake!!!! i mean, damn! that bastard!!!! i have never wanted to rip something apart so much in my life. the drama you have created here in lu with the tension between the characters is aweing. abso-fuckin-lutely amazing! i'm swill sweltering over naraku though. damn that bastard! such a great story!!! and poor inu. he really got the shit end of the stick. Kagome got man-candy and the ability to live for ever, Sesshoumaru got a mate and pulled that stick out of his ass that's been there for the whole seires, Naraku is gonna get his head handed to him (consider it cosmetic surgery to further his good looks...) and inuyasha got shit on. poor guy. honestly, my heart is breaking for the kid. :-/ oh well. good story, really really really really realllllllllllllly well written. keep it up!!!!!

You have the best damn rape scenes, I swear. Yes, I know, I am sick. I just cant help it. Keep up the great work!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?