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for Tortured Love

by Rinseternalsoul

person Rosa
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I think..I'm blushing...Well,this is good,can't wait to find out what happens next!
person Rosa
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Phew! I think..I'm blushing...Well,this is good,can't wait to find out what happens next!
person duke of spades
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
...^_^ my inner pervert is lovin this story!! it is so dirty!! ^_^ i like can wait to see what my hot naraku has plan!!!!
person Ashley
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O_O THANK YOU, now this is the kind of story I like ;) Update soon!
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wahooo! Oh my goodness, that was beyond hot.!! Wow so far, I have seen a little yaoi, some yuri and het. Wows!!! I love the direction this story is going. Its erotically hot. The story flows beautifully. Did I mention its really, really hot? *turns fan up*
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ack! I love you! Will you upload this to Single Spark and if so, when?
person Crystal
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh this is an awesome story. I love it and cant wait for more. Great writing
person catwoman316
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!! This is so different from all your other work, I like all the details. Hopefully Sess will get his turn with Kagome and then kill the others!!!
Oh well... yeah... I like the smutt! God, I'm such a hentai!
Update!!!!!!
person Katzztar
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This a very well written dark story. Smut would not bear justice for this, nor would a lemon. Those decriptions are used for sex scenes of lesser quality.
The best way to describe "Tortured Love" is a dark erotic story.

I got the impression that Naraku wanted to get Sesshoumaru together with Kagome but I still don't get his agenda. Well in truth that would be keeping Naraku in character, to have his motives unknown. After all, we still don't know why he cursed Miroku's grandfather in such a manner. Yes the wind tunnel is a terrible curse, but it is also a weapon tht has been used against it's creator, Naraku.

I first idea of why Naraku wants Kagome and Sesshoumaru together is that he wanted to separate her from inuyasha. But with the third chapter, I'm starting to wonder if he means to use Kagome to influence Sesshoumaru.

Congratulations on keeping Naraku in character, actually they all are in character.
person Anon
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that rocked. Please update soon.