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for Tortured Love

by Rinseternalsoul

person Kinnara
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, these chapters are all steamy, but I can't find a reason on exactly WHY would Naraku rape Kagome. *sigh* It's your story, so I won't try to make you change, but can you do me a favor? Update, plz!
person Deadly Teardrops
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
god, i don't know what to say but i'm in love your fic here! I love it! Please update soon!

ja ne!

DT
person RainStorm
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm so sorry. I didn't mean to offend you with my last review. I was trying to say that my curiousity paid off. That I enjoyed it, and praise your writting style. I didn't mean to upset you. PEACE!!!
person sesshy-koi
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Felt the need to take a shower after that last chapter. Very dark story and very,very good. Eagerly looking forward to the next update!
person Luna
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is absolutely the best fic ive read so far! i love the darkness of it and the smut heh... keep going!! *bookmarks*
person Kenshin
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is seriously very hot. I adore it. PLEASE UPDATE ASAP! :)
person Dragon Lady
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooh... very nice. Very nice. There is just something about dark fics that piques my interest. .... Well, the well written ones, that is. And yours is certainly well written! You keep everyone pretty much in character. Especially Naraku. You can just PICTURE him actually doing something like this. I eagerly await more.
person SilentDeath
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful Silent Death is very much liking this story! Damn! I would say I was blushing....but it would be a down right lie. As dark as my mind works.....You will always be the Queen of Smut! All Hail The Queen! At least I got your affectionate title of the Queen of Love em and Leave em! *Bows low*
person RainStorm
schedule July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dear Tortured,( I forgot your name)
Well, I have mixed feelings about what you did to the characters. I don't necessarilly mind what you're doing to Kagome (too much). It was rather erotic to me in a twisted way. I hate to think, that I have such a sick turn on button. On the other hand, I don't care for the way you're doing Sessh, but that's probably because he's my favotite character of all time(smile). And yes, you're right, you did warn me. However my curiosity got the best of me. Sessh getting head and fucking women is good, but threatening his manhood is not. Sessh is the man, he is proud, and very arrogant. But I have to beg on his behalf and mine, that you do not take away what makes his manhood. He's a fantacy of me and many women. He's clean, gorgeous, fine, strong, caring (even though he doesn't want you to know it) regal, and a screaming straight man(at least that's how he comes across to me). So, please don't make a punk out of him. Don't take his pride away from him and myself in the plot of this story. Sessh is "THA MAN", please keep him that way. Now, that I'm through with that, I have one question for you. Does the collar takes away only their powers, or will it in addition to that, also kill them in the long run? Please answer when you have the time and keep me posted if you can. Thank you for writting an intriguing yet troubling story (smile). PEACE!
person Bookreader9999
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter.

I too wonder how much Sesshomaru will be attached to Kagome before he might get a chance to mate with her.

Keep the chapters coming (please).