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December 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
me like! more please.
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October 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god!! I LOVE YOUR FIC!!!!!
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September 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It's not bad, but with a little work, it could be a whole lot better. See, you left out a few important details, like when Kikyou first kissed Kagome, you never mentioned that she felt disdain in the first place, but later you did. You should have added more there, like her thoughts or something. Also, for the end, I would have recommended a better conclusion; a stronger note of finality. I get the feeling that you stopped right before the actual end. Keep writing, though! I'm sure with more practice, you'll be great!
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February 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it dosent mader if you are strait as long as you write good storys and this one is good keep up the good work
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you really need to right the rest because it was reallt good.
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November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was a awsome read. a tad little short but still good
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July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad for or first time.
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July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice story! Like the pairing, can't find any others like it!
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July 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Write more like this this is a good fic.
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June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ... you know who i am... not bad.. dont know what you were so worried about it turned out fine...