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for The Arrangement

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person dah
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, This was just as good as I hoped it to be.. so wicked, so nice.. so hot. :P I really love this fic, and to say truth, it's my favorite. This last chappie was just perfeckt, thank you.
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*applauds*
person sweetkijo
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Bravo..Bravo....I laughed my assets off the whole time. That was great. Where do you come up with this shit? You truley are amazing. I hope your story wins. There only a few stories that have made me blush. but when you said pretty pony....I hid my eyes under my shirt and laughed. I am sad to see this story end, but no one could have done a better job. Good luck in school and I look forward to your future stories.
person Reiko Kashino
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ah yes...sweet revenge! Read it, loved it, kinda of sad its over. But, as the stupid clique goes "all good things must come to an end" (Don't cha just hate that line) I really enjoyed it, through and through. I understand you not doing a sequel. I've never liked them myself. They're never as good as the original (like all movies and a lot of books) and sometimes they end up kind of stupid. Anyways, as I am a huge fan of horses (and Sesshomaru) I thought the last chapter was very fitting. I loved how Kagome took matters into her own hands and made Sesshomaru her pet. And I'm also happy that Sesshomaru understood his punishment and took like all men should have in that case. Humiliation is a useful tool, girls. Learn to use it well.
Anyways, I just want to give you one more 'great job' and thank you for this great story!
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! Great job, and congrats on your nominations for IYFG. You deserve them. I must say that I really like the ending...that was so humiliating...gotta love pony play though...that was very well done. I have followed thsi story from the very beginning, and I must say that it is one of my all-time favorites...I recommend it to just about everyone I know that is interested in the Sess/Kag pairing. I am kind of sad to see that this has finally ended, but on the up side - now you will have time to work on 'In Under Deep'. I hope that it develops a following like this one has. I can't wait to see how it develops. ANYWAY - Hats off to you.

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person lost child
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mommy..*sniff* it's over!!...what an awesome story that was. I totally loved it. In fact I love it so much I'm gonna go back and read it again. I hope that u will also continue to work on In Under Deep now that this one is complete.
person Celes Prye
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*standing ovation* (if that is how you spell it lol) Hell yeah! Wonderful story =D I am so glad yet... *sniffle* so sad that you finished =) anyways GL to you in the spring semester and I shall look forward to your other writings
person Dianna
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
awsome story! i'm sad that its over i'll miss the excitement of the new updates! lol i'll just have to read ur in uder deep story (i think thats whats its called sorry)! =)
person Amanda-chan
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH MY FUCKING GOD!!!I LOVED IT,I LOVED IT!I FUCKING LOVED IT!!! WHAT A great job...!!!! The whole horse thing threw me off... but hey!!! It's cool... I still loved how you wrote it!!! All in all, I loved this fic! And like I said before, maybe someday you'll decide to take it from there... I thought before that maybe it might be as good... but being that it would be comming from you... I would't put ANYTHING past you!!! So IF you are going to write another one (the folling story after) please let me know at : dreamweaver502003@yahoo.com (thanks again, I had fun reading your fic!!!)
person Wendy
schedule January 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Lovely story with a looooovely finish. *happy sigh at Sesshou with braids and pink ribbons...* And now new chapters of In Under Deep, double yay!!
Good luck with college!