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Uh Oh, They are going to that club called Submission arent they? But that one girl at the club Kag and Sango go to is going to be working there right? So thats what you meant by pay attention to the bartender in that chapter a ways back. Well update soon, also update your other one soon to. The 'Under the sea' I believe it was called.

love the story keep write.
update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!

AWESOME CHAPTER!!!!

Keep it up I can't wait to find out what happens!!!

~Katana

o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o0o i wonder what happens?????

I normally never review on this site, too embarassed to admit I read here I guess. But due to the latest criticism of your last chapter, I felt the need to say something. Yes, your detail is incredibly graphic. Yes, I flinched. However, not only pleasant fluffy things happen in stories. As you say, this is a story about bondage, and bondage is about pushing your boundaries in ways mainstream society has no outlet for. And when you push your boundaries, you do not always find things you like. It is an exploration. I think people are only reacting that strongly because you write so graphically, and after submerging yourself into nice steamy sex scenes for so long, it is a little disconcerting to come across something that makes you twinge. Rest assured, I have no intention of abandoning this story. It is intelligent, well written and the sex not only is part of the plot, but is handled in an adult manner. You have my readership so long as the quality lasts.

boo ya! I was waiting for a chance when they'd go out. I bet the next chapter is going to be even more exciting than this one. Oh I hope none of Kagome's friends show up at the club or that might spell disaster if they were to notice her. Dang, I'm all excited now. K, you gotta keep this story going, and please update again soon

awesome as always

are you allwed to screw when your under your period?

great story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

wow, i thought that he was going to rape her, sort of. i guess it kinda was and wasnt at the same time, weird.
i hope everything works out when she wakes up, this chapter was different and i liked it. the period thing was sooo different.
i never read anything that involved a woman having her peroid and having sex at the same time. i hope it aint that messy
ewe.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you