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for The Arrangement

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person TricksterGoddess
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was interesting... I don't think that I will ever personally 'pack fudge' as some of my friends say^^ Please update soon and keep up the good work^__^!!!
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WONDERFUL!! MORE NOW!!!
person Amanda-chan
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thank you for updating!!! This was a really good chapter. Hope that Sess starts to show her how much he cares soon!!!! Damn this fic is hot! Cant wait for more! ~Amanda-chan
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay, you WIN!!! There is just no damn way that I can top that. Nope. No freaking way. First oral sex on a motorcycle... whew! I used to date a guy that had a motorcycle. Oh it brought back fond memories *sigh*. Then the anal sex with toys was WAY HOT!!!! OMFG! You are the queen. I need to go clean up now *blushing*. Way to go! Oh yes, congrats on the nomination to IYFG 3rd Qtr. 2005 contest for best lemon! I WAS in competition with you, but NOW I think I just lost! HAHAHA!! Easy come, easy go. Great job!
person sailoryue
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story. not a big fan of cok suking scenes so i always skip thos..but i love what youve done with kanna. making her human and just an outcast. cant wIT for the next chapter.
person sailoryue
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pretty good story. not a big fan of cok suking scenes so i always skip thos..but i love what youve done with kanna. making her human and just an outcast. cant wIT for the next chapter.

(if this posts twice....sory. i misspelled my email ^_^;;
person tsukashi
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I read all that you have posted yesterday and today and really WOW! I had little hope of finding anything good, and after opening a few unsatisfactory stories, I happened upon yours. I just love the whole bondage fantasy you have created here. Not only is the story hot, but there is a good plot to it, and I am just waiting for shit to hit the fan when Kagome finds out who her "master" truly is. (I look forward to some good angst there) I did see several errors over the course of the story, but a good beta read will fix all that, and you already knew that from your AN's. What is important is the story, and the way you draw the reader in and hold their attention. At first I was dubious about Jamie, I as most readers tend to frown on OC's, but as the story is progressing, she is growing on me. (which is good) I am just picturing Sess in nothing but a mask and flowing silk pants that slightly bell out around his ankles and I have to catch the drool before it short circuits my keyboard! hehe. So, keep up the good work, can't wait to see what Sess has in store now that he has "gathered some info" at the club on Kagome's interests. Muahahahahaha! Poor Inu Yasha, by the way! Poor guy, no wonder he is such an asshole, having to listen to Sess, lmao, getting all freaky, lmao, for how many years, lmao!!!!!! Ah, I do have an evil streak.
person danielle
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoy this fic. I'll be watching for the updates, hope they come quick and chuck full of hentai-ness!!
person MysticalElf
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLEASE WRITE MORE!!!!
person Sel
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy hot damn, this is an amazing sesshomaru/Kagome story, I can't wait to read more !!!!!!!!

Sel