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for The Arrangement

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person Amanda-chan
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!!!! THANKS FOR ANOTHER KICK ASS UPDATE!!!! CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN!!!!!!!!!! *DIES FROM HAPPINESS*
person Reiko Kashino
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah! I'm so glad you updated! It was a pretty down to earth chapter, but good all the same. I have really enjoyed the series so far and am really looking forward to when Kagome finds out who Sesshomaru really is!
person Midget
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Umm, there's a slight error on the page that I'd like you to fix IMMEDIATELY, quite an emergency really. There's no next chapter button. HELLO?!?! What the? Lol, dude, you're really awesome you know that? You're a Mum and you're writing this awesome, not to mention massively kinky, fic and I love it! Espesh because it's Kag/Sess! A few things tho, they still call it MacDonalds in Japan, (Yes I'm Japanese, woot, not, I jsut live in Australia) But it's pronounced Makudonarudo. and Life DOES suck. BADLY, i'd say. They need better blowjob lessons. Life sucks right now for because I can't get the man I want and he was mine first! Ahem, maybe I should get into a bit of pony-play and show him who's boss? Lol! ANywho, I really love this fic! And Because I think I'll want to read this again, I'm gonna copy it and put it in a word document so I don't have to always get on the internet. But I promise you i'll never use it as my fic. Anywho, please update soon! I can't wait. Do you do any like, thingies where you email people when the next chapter is up? If you do could you please include me on your list? Okay, ciao!

Midget(Sweet_suika7@hotmail.com)
person kogagirl05
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon!!!!! Love the story!!! ^_^

person Alone
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have three guilty pleasures in my life. The first Is when you updated a story. I love the arrangement and In under deep. They are a joy to read. The second is when Rinseternalsoul updates. And now that you two have joined forces to create the ultimate grouping of kinky, lemony, goodness of one-shots, that equals guilty pleasure number three. I am sad that this story is coming to its end, what a hell of a ride I say! But I can't wait to see what you have planned for an ending. Well Im sure we all understand "Life" so whenever you get around to updating I'll be waiting. Peace
person cjflutterbye
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oooo... hiding in his office- is the crap going to hit the fan? He's gonna get caught - that'll be fun! I'm really enjoying your fun-twisted story - I can't wait for more!
person No Sugar Added
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ahh! I love this story. I wonder when she'll find out? That will be good. I love the lemons, keep writing!
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh damn! Poor Kagome has to suffer the teasing of friends. I suppose, in her case, being a bondage freak could seem highly strange to others. In the case of me and you, no one would think anything of it!!! LOL! No doubt Miroku would just LOVE to get a hold of that little secret! She would never live it down. So Inuyasha has to maneuver Kagome through the office and meetings while keeping her away from Sesshomaru? For some reason I feel like this isn't going to go as planned. If I'm right, then I know the fireworks are going to fly! In a way Sesshomaru deserves what he gets for keeping the truth from her, but it sure has been a fun little secret! haha! I look forward to more~

Rinseternalsoul
person Mary
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite. Fanfiction. Ever.
In all that I have ever read ever, this is it.
I never knew I even liked s&m... and yet...
I also never knew that I liked the Kagome/Sesshomaru pairing, yet its become my favorite.
(Sesshomaru has always been my favorite... *drools*)
I love this story and I love the modern business world.
The charecters are well explained and easy to relate to and get into.
Thanks for writing what you have thus far, its greatly appreciated.
*waits with bated breath for the next chapters*
person risa
schedule November 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love it!! Nice flow of the story line, suspenseful and humorous. I enjoyed it. please more.