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for Kagome's Purpose

by kiara703

person Kage
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I know I just started reading, and this chapter and story had me rolling around laughing. I possibly reviewed another chapter, not sure. But this story is really well writen, not to mention absolutely GREAT! This is by far one of the best stories i've read in a while. Keep up the good work and continue to update! I'll be eagerly awaiting the next installment.
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great Chapters!!! So... the pairing is giong to be Yuuske/Kaome I see!! Is't not my favorite but I love your story so must that I'll keep read^_^!!!!!!! Oh I have a couple of questions the firstr one is: When/will Hiei now who Kagomes aother sensei was? and the second one: Is Sessy going to come into the picture? And if he is, is he still just the lord of the west or is he going to be the king of demon world?... well thats it for now can't wait till the next chapter!! But until then, bye^_^!!!! Oh, And thanks for writing such a great story!!!!
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter, your right as far as Yusuke's fighting technique goes. I've often wondered how Yusuke has lived as long as he has and then realized he hasn't. not really lol As for future commands I really don't know, that is a rather tough one. I'd say Sic em but I'm not sure if he really needs that command. Might save her from Hojou though lmao Can't wait to read the next one, Update soon please
person Anon
schedule July 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just love love your story as u very well know^^ i just finished reading Companion and i cant wait tell kagome and hiei meet sango and miroku^^ did song teach any fighting moves to kagome if she did do u think hiei will notice if she fites like sango???? as for a rosary on youko i love that idea cause he can be a pervert at times and i dont think kagome would like to hear his dirty thoughts all the time and she can help kurama tame youko a bit ^^ but not jin i love jin the way he is and since hes pretty harmless and not as abnoxios as others thers no need for him to be put on a leash.^-^ i cant wait till you update again!! the story get funnier every time i read it i just love it^^
person animeluva
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am so happy you updated..... i was cracking up laughing when Hiei threw the cakes and food to those who tried to 'poison' him....
i hope ur next chapter will be just as great...keep up the good work..
you're an awesome writer...UPDATE SOON!!!!!
person akutareru
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Mmkay, I think I read this on a different site somewhere or something... I have to say, lay off the Japanese words a bit. I really don't care what the other authors say or write, but using "ningen" in place of "human" (with exception of 'ningenkai') and "onna" in place of "woman" is really crappy. When you write your stories, do you ever go back and read them? 'Cause when you use certain Japanese words in an English sentence, it sounds very awkward. I mean, have you ever watched the subbed animes and hear the characters say "o-k" or some other random English word? Doesn't it just sound really wrong? It's pretty much the same thing when using Japanese in English sentences. It totaly ruins the flow.

And really, you shouldn't just use words 'cause you saw others use the same words in their fic, and you can't always trust reviewers to give you a correct answer. Go take some Japanese classes, or get a good Japanese text book to learn from.
person bd84
schedule July 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! my 2 fave animes! im curious to know what the next chapter brings, i really like this story so far! its the first one ive found with IY and YYH thats not just random smut! nothing wrong with that, it just gets old. keep up the good work! i cant wait to see how you introduce the rest of the characters!
person kai
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yusuke! that's who it is!! so when is kurama/youko and kagome gonna find out that they both know hiei? the next chappie? anyways udpate soon, i wanna see what dana does to kagome and then what kagome, hiei, or kurama does to her!! update soon!
person Tris
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a cliffy i like it, please up-date and is this Heie person a reincarnation of Inuyash?
person Anaidil
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow!!! I love this story is very interesting, serious and funny at the same time. I have to say that you are a talented writer. Keep up with the excellent job. I can’t wait to read next chapter so PLEASE update as soon as you possibly can.

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