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person Gem
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Rubs hands togeather with child-like glee! OOh this is shaping up to be a good one. I'll be watching for updates.
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, this is shaping up to be a great story. I love how you have portrayed everything, especially the characters and their relationships. I hate reading a story that has potential but the author doesn't take the time to focus on the interactions of characters and the building of the story. I will definitely be watching this one for updates.
person animeluva
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story....i hope you update real soon!!
person Iamreven
schedule June 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK, I'm hooked.I love a good iy/yyh crossover and this one is shaping up to be in that catagory. Keep the updates coming!
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh a new fic for me to stalk, hope you don't mind if I hang out here for a while ;) This looks to have alot of potential to it. First chapter was of excellent length and I love the amount of detail that you've put into it. Nothing perks me up like alot of detail in a story. Well, except for lemons that is, but then thats another story entirely lol I like how you're going to focus mainly on relationships. I agree with you battles are important but to me building on the relationship is much more important. I'm curious if that display of power alerted Naraku's child as to her location? I'm not certain that the blast of energy was enough to penatrate the barrier if that is indeed where he is. I'm looking forward to this first meeting, now that the guys know about her I seriously doubt they will let her pass by without at the very least observing her, if not introducing themselves in some fashion. I look forward to the next chapter, please update soon.
person animeluva
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story...the story so far is awesome. I do hope that you will continue with this story and update soon!