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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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October 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please finish the story i love your storys
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July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aahhh...ok ok heres some tips...dont promise nething b/c u might trap ur self into something which could screw up ur original story plan. also please dont comment unless its at the end of the chapter unless its to verify something. other than that u have a great story line. keep up the great work and please update soon...also i really do like it so far and the alternate ending wasnt to bad in fact it was really good except it would have been nice w/ more detail ;)
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June 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon,I wanna see inuyasha kick kogas ass big time.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So far i think its pretty good but I don't like the cliffhanger.
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The chapter length is fine, as long as there is good detail, that is. I like it, very much! So, please, continue it. Update soon. ( ^-^ )
- --The Bunny Under Your Bed
- --The Bunny Under Your Bed
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmn... I said I liked it, and I'm not lieing. There is detail in it, and I can understand it. The storyline, I think is okay. I just wanted to add that... I'll be checking for updates on this one. o-o;
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not to be mean or anything, but that was really sucky.......i mean, not enough details, and not enough chapters.
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ME LOVE THIS STORY VERY MUCH! PLLLEEEEAAASSEE CINTINUE.