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for Head Trauma

by sweetsatincocoa

person ravenshadow
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Although I rarely write fanfiction I enjoy reading it a great deal. I enjoyed what you had given us the first time. It had a good plot; however the last two updates seemed to go in an entirely different direction from the start. This flows smoothly and the more detailed discriptions do create a darker imagry than the original. Thank you for sharing it with the rest of us.
person KLeigh
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You know, I am glad that you have continued this fic. Though I am a Kagome fan, I love seeing her as the badgirl as well. I think that you have done a good job with writing this fic, and am thrilled that you are going to continue. I can't wait to see what you have planned for her at the end. I really don't think she looks good with IY anyways, so him being with Sess is a bonus in my book. Please keep the chapters coming, and I will be reading.
person Anon
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmm.keep on going