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for The Special Spa Package

by BeautifulSilentDeath

person Maggie
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was good. I wish I could find a spa like that. lol, but it was well writtne. There were some spelling errors, but the story moved along just great. I loved it.
person sassy
schedule January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hay dose she go back macvke her go back for more pleze write another chapter.
person UnKnOwN
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ha HA HA! that was good. and it made me laugh. Is that a bad thing?

Nice ummm fuck.. ahhh I mean fic!!! lol

-UnKnOwN
person Flightoffancy
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who in their right mind would dare to flame this extremely hot story. I wanted it to go on and on and on. If you know of any real spas like this give me a clue. THis was too much. I love your smut. It is imaginative, creative and hot. Just who is your inspiration? Look forward to more in the future.
person paxy_o
schedule December 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a beautiful, very beautiful very sexy climax; love the way you set that up
schedule December 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, sign me up for that package as well... um... wait, my hubby may not like that! Dammit! Oh well... LOL

That was friggin' wonderful! I truly enjoyed it and... um... WOW!!!!! Bravo!
person hot hot hot
schedule November 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn that was good.But you need another chapter. * *
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person Tenno
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it! You write some of the best lemons I've ever read. There were a couple of minor spelling errors, but bearly cought them because I was so wrapped up in the story. ^^
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I so wish that they had spa's like that in real life and like down the street from me! lol That was a good one!
person wynter89
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that wasss HOT... i cant believe i really read that.. it is really amazing. it would be really kool if you had a sequel to that. Sesshomaru is one hot individual.

good luck
may kami-sama be with you