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by medli

schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, but their are just a few gramatical errors. But still keep up the good work, and PLEASE no more CLIFF HANGERS.
person Lita
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
How dare you leave me with a flashback, that is one of the ultimate cliffhangers. (bookmarks and waits for update)
person Lita
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Stupid enter key, feh. I love this story, you must update soon! (:
person BethieK
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello ^_^ i just wanted to say that i love LOVE this story but if inuyasha and kagome dont end up together shit will hit the fan because kikyo and inuyasha need to both relize kikyos dead anyways please update as soon as possile and please dont be and ass like other people and not update at all (could you please email me and tell me if your going to keep updating)
Please and thank you
BK
P.s. my email if u cant see it Robin592002@hotmail.com
person Kirah
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hmmmm... interesting... Inuyasha's OOC, though. Update soon!
person AnimeGurl
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please update soon! This story is interesting. I really like the plot so far. Write more soon!
person Chi
schedule July 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice... i am thoroughly enjoying the story.I cant wait to see what happens, LOL i cant wait for the twist. Just one more thing, I'm very impressed by your writing stlye, some times its so hard to find a well writen story. LOL
up date soon . and quicker ~.^

Chi
person Angel452
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What will happen next? What will happen after their night? Will Inuyasha change his mind and choose Kagome or will it be to late? Will Kagome become pregnant? Please update soon.
person dog demon
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE THIS IDEA. IT'S SO GREAT. PLEASE UPDATE SOON.
person chanda
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it.. Please update soon..