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person BethieK
schedule July 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o.o..........................god damnit i cant even think of a way to discribe what im feeling right now im mad that technecly inuyasha is being forced to be with kagome because of these stupid laws.... i want him to love her with every fiber of his being not to be forced he should love her anyways damnit kikyos sapose to be dead in other words they really wernt ment to be together he was ment to be with her damn reincarnation i just wish he would relize this anywho its a great story im just a lil pissed at how this is all going but hey its still good and as long as they can be together and actually love eachother (which really is only a problem for inuyasha in this story -.-) then ill be happy so please hurry and update soon ^_^
please and thankies
BethieK
person T
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Dont worry i like ur lemons. love ur story u've got me captivated and i kno by the quality of ur stori so far that you wont lert me down. keep writing. 4 stars.
person dog demon
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY. HURRY AND UPDATE PLEASE.
person Twilight
schedule July 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That must suck for inu but it's what he gets!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Bethiek
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg that was beautiful , the passion!!! the drama!!!! the sex !!!! it was fuckin awsome shit but damnit if he doesent end up with kagome i am seriously gonna kick some as >=( anywho i love this story and if you do not update soon i shell become cross
update soon please and thank you
BethieK
person Acey
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this was awesome! I can't wait until you update!
person ava
schedule July 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really really..etc. need to know what is going to happen. i love this story a lot and can't wait to read what is going to happen next. i hope you continue to write this story soon, that is my one request, hehehe. you are a very good writer and this story is very compelling to read. PLEASE continue. keep up the good work.
person yukana
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad keep going please e-mail me when you have another chapter up I have to take care of my grandpa because he just got back from the hospital.(he has gang green.)
person dog demon
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT. LOVE THE STORY. HURRY AND UPDATE WITH THE NEXT CHAPTER.
person BirdieBlythe
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yea!!! i was so happy to see you updated so soon. It was a great chapter. I loved it!