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by medli

person bettychan
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I do love this story. I hope it does have a happy ending for Inuyasha and Kagome. Please update as soon as you can.
person kagome10460
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
pleeeeeese update soooon .im waiting :)
person Anon
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
So any request to a demon has to be honored? That's stupid. So Naraku could have said, "Inuyasha, I request that you give me your jewel shards," and Inuyasha would have to do it.

And why didn't Kagome see the jewel under her bed? She can spot a shard inside a demon but she can't see the whole jewel under her bed for two months?

Do you even know the Inuyasha story and these characters? It doesn't look like it.
person Chibi
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, nice story. Happy sad Happy sad....Why must you confuse the Chibi's small head? o.o O well good story anyway. Sorry I only just now reveied...but I only just now found it >> hehe. *secretly steals kikyo plushie and burrys her in her back yard were no one will ever find her!* Mwhahahaha, Kagome and Inu yasha will love each other no matter what! Even if I have to eliminate all other options one by one! * scratches kikyos name off of her list* ^.^;;;;;;;; hehehe anyway, love your story please write more... pwease *eyes get all big and bubbly* Y-you wouldn't was Chibi to cry would you? *sniff*sniff*
person kagome10460
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it :) it was cool hope you up date it soon really want to read the end^_^
person t
schedule August 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This...is...so...SAD!!! I started crying in the first couple of chapters. Hope your computer is fixed soon.
person dd
schedule August 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
just finished reading chapter 7.
each chapter is well written. hope there is more soon.
the suspence is awful, you gotta love those cliffy's.
person Connor
schedule August 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow.... Iv been reading these story's for a awhile and Iv never done a reveiw.. (just out of being lazy :P) but after reading this one i have to say somthing I mean this was one of the BEST story's iv found, it was also the worst! .. :( the story and writing itself was awsome but it sucked how toren up they got !! :(( !! lol I really loved this story I started to read this just to pass the time seeing as how it is VERY late lol but i couldnt move after i started reading it... also ... -.- I want to hold IY by the neck and start shacking an yelling at him .... (although he would prolly slice me to peaice's :( ) anyway great great story!
person BethieK
schedule August 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
omfg -is allmost in tears- that was beautiful.... i just omg please update soon i just cant wait to know what happends because i just love this story so much its crazy how good it is so umm please update soon
ill be watching
BethieK
person ava
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow you really are doing a wonderful job of this story. these last chapters are very well writen. this story is so original. it is strange to read a story about the love of inuyasha and kagome with kikyo being the love of inuyasha...but for how long?