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for A Universe of Illusions

by biancaharl

person abheff
schedule June 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really loved your fic!! I can't understand why you don't have more reviews. I thought it was really good, and loved the humor and especially the lemons!! (Yay lemons!) This is the first fic that makes kagome a model, very interesting and quite original. Keep up the great work. I look forward to reading more of your work.
person kitty
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was cute ^_^ really cute lol
person Megan Consoer
schedule July 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person TAJE
schedule July 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh Wow! This was Tight! I was so absorbed by the way you had the characters going. You had me hating Sesshomaru to no end. But as I read on, I had to reserve my judgement. You had me going. I really love this story. You writing is supberb. Kudos on you translation, that must've been hard! Write More. Peace!
person JeSsI
schedule July 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AAAAHHHH!!!!!
I loved it!!
you have become one of my new favorite writers!!!!
i hope you start a new sess/kag soon!!!
did i mention that i loved your story???!!!
person catwoman316
schedule July 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aw, that was such a nice story! I really felt with Kagome from the beginning, you did a very good job in describing the places they went to. I liked the ending, especially because both, Sesshomaru and Kagome, realized that they were not the ones they thought they were. Sess was no womanizer and Kagome no rich girl, just like the title says: a universe of illusions.
person amhor56
schedule June 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful! Absolutely beautiful! What a wonderful story. I was absolutely heartbroken when Sesshomaru told her it was over. He ended the relationship so coldly. I felt like choping his head off! Wonderful imagery! I give you my respect for doing such a good job in translating this story! Than you so much! Also thank you for the fast updating you did on the story!
person amhor56
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I think its great. Even thought you translated it. Im sure it must taken lots of time and effort. Nice job and update soon.
person Anon
schedule June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is very good! i can't wait for you to update
person Chokoreto
schedule June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHH this is soooo gooood!! hmmm keep up! hope you update another chapter....ahh godd sesshomaru hahahas at least the lamp fell and fire broke out hmmm is kagome going to seduce HIM now?! hahahas verryy interesting anwayss good job!!