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Chapter Eight Review: Genkai hit the nail on the head with that one, I'm sure each of the guys are going to be cursing this incident for a very longtime with the training she is likely to throw out. Not to mention the fit Koenma, Kouga, and Sesshoumaru are going to have if they find out that she was almost killed by Kanna. It doesn't bode well for gaining their approval when the guys decide to take her as their mate. Although Hiei has never struck me as the type to give a damn about approval lol Very good chapter, I'm on to read the next one! Keep up the good work.

Chapter Nine: *Snickers* That was the last thing she ever expected the two of them to say lol Her heart rate probably just soared through the roof with just those few words from Kurama. I think everyone is going to get what they want in this instance and I can't wait to see how this plays out. Frankly I'm surprised that Genkai was able to keep Hiei away from her as long as she did. I wonder how many times he decided to ignore her words and go in there only to stop himself. I lok forward to the next chapter! Update soon please.

Hopefully Inuyasha would't be that stupid, then again the resulting confrontation could be quite amusing assuming Kagome didn't sit him straight to hell. I'm not sure what Inuyasha was expecting, surely Kagome wouldn't pine away for the rest of her life over someone that was supposed to be dead right? Baka hanyou should be happy that she is happy but then what do I know lol It seems as if Keiko has a perverted side that no one knew about wanting all the details. Perhaps she wants them for in case she pulls a certain Taiyoukai off to a spare bedroom. As for Kagome, I want to shake her silly. Why on earth would someone object to having Kurama offering to take a shower with them? Is she insane?! lol Good chapter, update soon please!

I'm really enjoying this & I've been looking for updates almost constantly. Last night I kept saying I was just going to check 1 more time before I went to bed & I wound up staying up until 5 AM. This part from the end of chapter 10 doesn't make much sense as written, the last sentence.

Yusuke heard his comment. "What would you know? I don't you spend to much time around humans."

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Man what a great fanfic, I love it.
i can't wait for the next update
thanks for such a great read

this is awesome story please continue update soon.

your story is awesome please continue...cant wait until the next chapter

This is a wonderful story I cant wait for the next update. Please update soon

Chanda

Oh my, what's Kagome's reaction going to be when she finds out Inuyasha is still alive? And took Kikyo as a mate? Oh I imagine she isn't going to be happy she spent the past year grieving for her first love who swore he loved her but had to uphold a promise to join her rival in hell. Yeesh, this could get messy. And I can already imagine the hell Inuyasha is going to put her through when he finds out she has snared the interest of both Kurama and Hiei. As it sits I don't think either of them will tolerate the hanyou's posturing for very long. Excellent chapter, I cannot wait until the next one comes out. Update soon please!

it caught me with the short intro. i can't wait to see what happens. some of my favorite fics are the mix of the two demons and Kagome. please update soon