rate_review Reviews

You hated that chapter! Who are you, Bethoven? It was lovely and exciting! I just read through the whole fic and couldn't stop. I love your style. The ideas with the oranges and riddle are absolutely unique. This is totally awesome!

Snowfall

Ummm...'The End'??? Okay, that was just mean! I'll just have to put you in my fav's so that I can check up on you from time to time...meany!

WTF??!!! Wgy can't she?? What's wrong with her!!! I'd freakin throttle her...unless she want's him to ask her father or other high ranking male figure for her hand first. then it's okay ^^ Other wise....

Woohoo! Another update! Well, I must say, I'm on my toes to find about about this "last time" and "she" stuff. Good chapter! I feel sorry for the little kid, but then again, I would cry if I met Inuyasha too, probably for a different reason though. Heehee. The next chapter better be worth the wait! Keep it up!

Noooooooooo! How could you! I won't accept it! If you make Inu betray Kagome with Kikyo im gonna die! PLEASE let my suspicions be wrong!

Nice chappie! (mood swings much? o_O)

Hello! I really like this fic! SF is awsome and I like the fog thing in that chapter! Heheh! Well, Im sorry to hear you wont be posting for a while. I check everyday for updates. Please come back with more than one chapter! =3

YAY!!!! Coooooool fic! Character develpment is all to nice in this one. Like your writing! Like the story! Keep it up!

Yay! New Chapter! Us fans aleways appreciate a fast update! Anyways, bravo on having a long chapter. And you asked for reviews on the lemon? Well here's my opinion: The lemon was...different. Normally, lemons on this site make the 'reader squirm' (heheheh), but this time, I felt, it was more for the story and the characters. I think you used it in the right way, since it was sooner than expected in the story, but If your gonna put some more lemons in here, they gotta be HOTTER! Heehee. Well thats just what I thought. I liked how you used it though! The whole chapter was fun! And one last thing to say: Curse you for the cliffhanger, and update soon. Bye! :D

Wow! Yay! Another chapter! Please leave the Point of View lines out. To many line codes can get confusing. Anyways, Im SUPER excited to find out what happens! Although, Im a little sad, this chapter moved too fast. It also seemed to be consecutive time. I thought we were going to swtich between the time him and Kikyou were dating, the time him and Kagome were dating, and the time him and Kogome were first meeting. I felt like in this chapter we should have switched between Inu and Kagome having a fight in the future and them first meeting. It would have been cool to see him chase after her and be all "I love you!!" and then read about him first putting the moves on her. You know? Well, thats just my opinion. Still an awesome story though! Dont make me wait too long for the next chapter! =D

Problem? Short chapters.



Likes? Setting, pace, and characters.



conclusion? Awesome.