rate_review Reviews

awesome write more, hey maybe a sesshoumaru story :P

hehe, I liked it. too bad you didnt mark out what was conversation with "[text]" or - [text]
I still enjoyed it, very much.
Liz~

I just came across your stories and I went ahead and read all three of them in order. I have to say, such intense sex isn't normally my forte (I guess I'm a romantic softie at heart) but I really got into all three parts of this fic. Men being dominant can definately be exciting, no? There were also alot of elements that I thought were unique and when I read them they made total sense. Like Inuyasha using tetsusaiga (spelling?) to open the barrier to Kagome's time. Duh, why didn't I think of that? And after reading the high-handed way you had the characters reunite I thought how appropriate it would be to have Miroku and Sango experiance something similar.....literally 30 seconds before I read that you had the same idea first! Anyways, thanks for the good read. I hope you continue to write. And I noticed a few comments about your lack of punctuation. Don't worry too much about it. You'll develop that stuff better as you go but it's the imagination that can't be learned! Hope to see you soon =)