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I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapter?

Wow this story rocks it took awhile but wow UPDATE SOON and thanks for your review!!

I <|3 you. this is grand.

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i heart you.

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ldymoonluvsinuyasha you rock!!! I've been reading Betrayal's Gift and I love it, I read through the comments of this story and I would suggest that you just not pay any attention to what that person said, they sure had a lot to say but obviously they were jealous. So what if you didn't put quotations it's your story, I followed it just fine I guess they were not intelligent enough to get the picture. When they write their own story they can put all the damn quotations they want.

Anyway, enough of that are you goint to write out what Miroku and Sango do. I loved the visuals you gave of Inuyasha all that sweat and passion as you can tell I am a fan of Miroku so please write a story about him.

Carmen

um... you have no idea how to write proper ly do you?

i don't know if you realize this but, you need quotations, spacing,
and you get confused alot when it comes to the point of view and tense
that you are speaking in.

ugh.

Uh Wow, that was some very vivid imagery there. I am still hot over the scene of Inuyasha doing what he should be good at. (Fans self) Anyone who reads this story will be very pleased, no satisfied with the end results. I tip my hat to you ldymoonluvsinuyasha, please keep writing.

your fan

I thought that the story was vivid in description when it needed to be. I had a hard time focusing at the beginning as it dragged, but then had a hard on later and was really focused. Felt that the story line carried over well from the first story.

good strong lemon. very well played out. it's well written except for the missing qoutation marks but other then for that, great stuff! loved it!

I need a cigarette (puff puff "and I don't even smoke" ) whoa I tell you I am jealous I loved everyone of your stories I tell you Kouga, Inu wow you are some verry strong and virile men amen to that..........The way you wrote it with feel girl gave me such naughty thoughts that if I had of piece of shikon it would turn straight black cause I must say I was EXCITED "notice those words are capitalized ok well now I must say I'm so impressed with what you did that I have to give you a CHALLENGE "heheheh as I laugh evily" You need to hook up Sango & Miroku OF course my MAN of the HOUR LORD SHESSY and Kagura I think how does that sound dare to take the challenge I will wait to see if you do just keep up your series of "YOU BELONG TO ME" I know you had just gotten into Mirku and Sango so continue please then end it with Lord Shessy and Kagura..............She don't you just love it when My plan comes together........KEEP it up kay bye.....