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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I read it again... man... you are fucking awesome. ^^;
~AR
~AR
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June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. I enjoyed the twist which revealed that Koga was not the only one with wondering thoughts. The dialogue revealed the innermost thoughts of both Ayame and Koga and allowed each one to lay all the cards on the table. It was refreshing to read a story that captures the essence of both characters and allows the reader to explore the situation from both characters' point of view. Story could use more description in the "climax" as Koga and Ayame finally "come together" and their frustration is released.
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June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I was so into the Story I forgot about my Ice cream and it melted. I only took three bites of it. Too bad for me! Great story!!!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I am so glad that you sent me those reviews! I wouldn't have found this story without it. I checked the kouga/ayame section to see if you had done a sequal, but it wasn't there. Sometimes things slip by me, because I'll be busy writing up a new chapter. Excellent continuation! I'm honored that you hold my work in such high regards, because you're a really good writer as well. I hope to see some more of your stuff.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh my gravy I think I got the vapors I feel steam just coming off of me I'm just like CAN THAT BE ME??????????? WOw I would love to just say the women of the world thank you and lovvved that scene maybe it will happen to me keeeep I mean it keep writing stories that make you go hum and we will add ooohh and ahhh too????
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
holy shit... That was so fucking hot. -faints-
fancy a roleplay?
Yahoo: ryoko_aizawa
AIM: Anjel Rocker88
fancy a roleplay?
Yahoo: ryoko_aizawa
AIM: Anjel Rocker88
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*sniffles and hugs the author* Thank you for giving them a happy ending!!!
I cried when I read the oneshot, and I was so upset, I couldn't review (seriously).
Interesting twist you put on though about Ayame telling Kouga about Inu... Kudos, kudos to you! ^_^
That lemon too... Lol, I guess it's a good thing the man of my desires isn't here right now, lol.
Good job though!
~Takai no Tenshi
I cried when I read the oneshot, and I was so upset, I couldn't review (seriously).
Interesting twist you put on though about Ayame telling Kouga about Inu... Kudos, kudos to you! ^_^
That lemon too... Lol, I guess it's a good thing the man of my desires isn't here right now, lol.
Good job though!
~Takai no Tenshi
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oops! Gomen ne! I forgot something in my review!
Lol, got so excited that Kouga and Ayame now have a happy ending that yet.... ^__^;;;
Anyway, instead of doing _ before every spoken sentence, just use quotation marks. It makes it a lot easier to read. That way, you won't have to do this ( ) every time you want to say like she giggled, or she snarled.
That's all!
~Takai no Tenshi
Lol, got so excited that Kouga and Ayame now have a happy ending that yet.... ^__^;;;
Anyway, instead of doing _ before every spoken sentence, just use quotation marks. It makes it a lot easier to read. That way, you won't have to do this ( ) every time you want to say like she giggled, or she snarled.
That's all!
~Takai no Tenshi