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for Heated Abduction

by MayosTS08

person Princess Sin
schedule August 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRAY but if you're still going to keep it a secret as to who it is. can't you give us
a little hint as to whom it is
person War-chan
schedule August 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
IS IT SESSHOMARU!?!?!?!?!?!?!?! Please say it is! Or Maybe Naraku!?!? That's always good. KOUGA!?!?!?!?!?!!? He's "OK"......I guess,..........................I can't think of anyone else...............................*just had a happy thought*, Did Kagome DIE!?!!?!?!?!?!?! ^_____^ I hope so! i really, REALLY do!!! Please, PLEASE, PlEaSe!!!!!!!!!! UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Ja ne
HappyHappyJumpyJumpy!!!
Miss War-chan ^_~
person Princess Sin
schedule August 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, this was a good story. do you plan on finishing
it. i hope so because i'm dying to know who it was that
saved inuyasha
person ChrisKaz
schedule July 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story so far. I hope you continue to write more chapters cause this story has potential and the plot is intriuging. I really want to find out what happens to everyone, and who the misterious man is, though I already have a guess. Please update soon.
person crysta
schedule July 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hi. I like the story so far. Lots of plot, no real lemon yet but I'm sure its coming soon. hmmm, wonder who saved him? sooo sneeky for not telling yet, that's a wicked little cliffhanger... please keep writing, I'll keep reading. *hug*
person yaoi lover 12
schedule July 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah! The suspense! Although I think I know who Inuyasha's mystery savior might be...well, I hope I do anyways cuz he's my fav character...
Anyways, great story. Keep up the good work. I'll be waiting for more updates, but as I always say, take your time. Don't rush out something crappy just to get it done.
person Anon
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
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UpdaTE!!!!!
person Akela
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
more.
person foxykittykat
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it's sesshomaru right? this is a great story update soon
person SHADOW.
schedule July 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOH SWEET. LOVED IT, ABSOLUTLY LOVED IT...I TOTALY CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY TO COME...CAN'T WAIT TO SEE WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, SO GET IN GEAR AND PUT UP MORE CHAPTERS TO THIS STORY SOON PLEEEEEASE!!!!! OOH GOOD WORK BY THE WAY, KEEP IT UP.