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July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Kinnara recommended it, I don't know if she reviewed, but we loved your mr. brightside. Ps. My e-mail address is oh so totally fake. *sighs with sadness* I am so sorry!
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July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked the story please hurry with the next chapter. I want to know what happens really bad.
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July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Keep righting i love this story
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July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
cool chappy
i love it
i love it
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
To tell you the true I rather enjoy the A/N: sections a little more them the fic...naw...the fic was cool too.
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was good. If I were Kagome, I would have followed through with the vision. lol. CONTINUE!
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow... surprisingly, your fanfic was the most meaningful one i have read from this site... the most beeeeautifully written "drama" lol. I'm impressed. You ARE gonna continue writing it right? Oh and by the way, the additional comments you concluded in the end are hilarious. I didn't know I'd end up reading an Inuyasha fic again and yours is sooooo good!! ^-^ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ PLZ continue it!!!!! I really like this story! Me wanna read what happens! ^-^
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For a second there I actully thought Kaogme stabbed both Inuyasha and that son of a bitch Kikyo. Still, she shouldn't cut herself because she can't be with Inuyasha. I mean that's just stupid. Great Fanfiction! Keep Going. I started one too. Mines is My One and Only Love.
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June 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i liked it, it was very nice. Death is always part of my own stories. Not the ones I post on here, just the ones I write for fun. When I get bored. Anyway, it was very nice. But toward the end I did notice that you switched tenses, and then switched back. Like,
Kagome rose slowly from the river, as if savoring it. She is picking up the dagger, rolling in in her palm as if to memorize it. she looks into the forest, feeling eyes on her body from somewhere deep within the dark foliage. The young woman turned her attention back to the dagger......
I just made up a line. Do you see? I don't mind, I'm just pointing it out. But, really, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I do hope you continue very soon?? ja!! ^-^
Kagome rose slowly from the river, as if savoring it. She is picking up the dagger, rolling in in her palm as if to memorize it. she looks into the forest, feeling eyes on her body from somewhere deep within the dark foliage. The young woman turned her attention back to the dagger......
I just made up a line. Do you see? I don't mind, I'm just pointing it out. But, really, I LOVE THIS STORY!!!! I do hope you continue very soon?? ja!! ^-^