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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!! that was an evily cliffy of doom!!!!! please please dont make me waite to long to find out what happens i will die if i dont find out so please please please UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey ..... update i want to read more its so exciting!!
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey .. just wanted to say cool story so far and i don´t think kags is too young ... i mean i don´t wanna say the wrong thing but i myself arn´t that much older^^" ... and i know that a 14y.-old girl can be very mature and it´s also something else to have her this age .. pers. i really think that idea rocks!^^
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June 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think the plot is very good. It has the makeing for a great story. They only thing I see, the "may" and I mean just "may". Cause some problems is the age thing. But hey that is just me. But if you want my addvice, I say make Kag a little bit older, like 16 or somthing like that. That way you can keep the illegol part of your story, but not as I would say too illegol. But hey that just me. I'm still looking forwered to reading your story. I hope you have the frist chap out soon.