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Please write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

dude u have to write more. i so wanna find out what happens to Kagome. plz write plz write!

I like it so far. Please update soon!

wow i like this fic tehehehe can you please email me with the title when you update? well see yain the next chapter! i really like it!

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! this was really good. hope u update soon. i really wanna knoe wat happens.... SOON!!!!!!!!!!! LMAO!!!!!!!!!! keep it up!!!!!!

evil!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! lmao jk update! i love it!!!!!

Wow! That was a really good first chapter! And although the cliffie was evil, I must admit, it was a good one! Might i suggest something? well two somethings actually. Firstly: you posted the summary in the first chapter and a note on the second. Maybe combine them? a lot of people might just leave if they find they have to skip the first couple of "chapters" to get to the story. Secondly, your convos in the story. Try to space out the speech. I'm not sure if it's just the internet messing it up but your convos between characters are just one big paragraph. Every time a new person speaks, hit the enter botton and make a new paragraph! Ok! That's it! i didn't see and spelling/grammer error, so good job! Keep up the good work!!

OMG OMG OMG OMG OMG! [FYI 5 OMG's is a really good sign that i only give to stories with really good talent so u should b proud!] I already know im going to love this story so please don't hold back on me and everyone else who loves this story come on i beg of u don't do it!!! Update real soon or ill keep bugging you and bugging you until you do...... Muahahahaha!!

Its a strange plot but I like it ! please do contine it is very interesting

I like it i really do. But shes right i would make her 16 its just better that way. I mean he's still older then her by like alot by 3 to 4 years.SO u know but i love it alotz so please keep writing it!!!