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for My Cinderella

by JazmineD

person Jess / TempesT
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THIS STORY IS ONE OF THE BEST I"VE READ i can't wate for the next chapters ;)
person Liz
schedule July 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWWWW!!!!!!! What a beautiful story. Rin and Sessy they make such a nice pair. UPDATE SOON OR FELL MY WRATH
person InuObsessed o.o
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol... i loved it when kagura, Sarah, and their father all did the evil laugh.. cant wait until you update!! =]
person monara
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o thats great its much better then the last one and not as many errors u r getting much better im so proud!!!lol
person dillon
schedule June 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the story update ASAP!!!!
person Toy girl
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! it was short and sad but its in imporvment!!! i like it a lot!!! update ASAP!!!!^^
person dillon
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
o that is great i relly hope she doesnt go home shell be killed she should go to sangos
or kagomes and stay the night its so sad !!!!!!or maybe shell stay with sesshy! ^_^
person monara
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love the fic its so sad i really hope they dont kill her and she doesnt give it up that night that would be kinda sad but he should totaly like hug her a lot and talk to her and like date!!!!awsome fic but it seems rushed because of the grammar no offence but take a little longer to make the next chapter ok?! by the way awsome dude!!!!
person Mmoirai
schedule June 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Whew! Rin is outta there! YESSS! Pleeeeease be careful Sesshoumaru!
person animegirl007
schedule June 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OOOHHH!!! POOR RIN!!!! living that terrible life......now that she has Sesshomaru I hope some of that pain will go away....but, I wonder what her step family will do to her????? I hope she doesn't go home...let her stay with one of her friends.....update soon

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