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for My Cinderella

by JazmineD

person Ren
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice, keep up the wonderful work!!!
person Rebecca
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm full of emotion at this moment. But that story just really ..... KICK ASS! that is all i hav 2 say sorry this is so short .=)
person Lady Kauya
schedule September 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
O.O AWSOME!!!!But why you have to stop there??It was getting good T_T ......
Anyways....Can't wait till the next chapter!!Please update soon!Such a kawaii and romantic story...^_^
person kagome2004
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME AWESOME AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! CAN'T WAIT FOR MORE
person KatrinaKaiba
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, she's pregnant?! The lemons were good. I liked the end of this chapter.

person Liz
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
RIN'S PREGNANT??????????????????????????????????????????????? *winks* great twist she just said 'i'm really pregnant' PLEASE UPDATE SOON DON'T LEAVE US (readers) IN SURPENSE.
person Menomaru
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just started reading this story, and normally im slow at reading theese things. But i read your story on one evening:D i love it! Please update it!
person Ren
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Intruiging, tee hee hee, she became pregnant so fast, tee hee hee, then again though Sesshoumaru originally IS a youkai. Tee hee hee, so yeah, but anyways, I must say, great work, contiinue please...
person Ren
schedule August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not bad, keep up the great work...tee hee hee.
person animegirl007
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It wasn't that bad.......I'm not a very good lemon writer myself....It all worked ....keep it coming ...I also can't wait until the next chapter of your other story....

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