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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is getting really interesting!! please update soon!!.. oh, and can you maybe, next time, space out your story a little bit more?? it kinda seems all squished together...
update!!! =]
update!!! =]
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats great plz make the next chapter!!!! me likey the story plz hurry for the next chapter k!!!!!!
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awe! You're so... horrible. Are you kidding? What the hell? This is a total ripoff of that crappy movie Hilary Duff played in.
On top of that, none of this is realistic, the characters hold *no* resemblance to the anime, and it's hardly even an a fanfiction.
To top that off, it's poorly written, there are grammar/spelling errors all over, and it's just a badly written story.
On top of that, none of this is realistic, the characters hold *no* resemblance to the anime, and it's hardly even an a fanfiction.
To top that off, it's poorly written, there are grammar/spelling errors all over, and it's just a badly written story.
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this story brings back memories of the movie....i love it! update ASAP!!!!
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June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwwww!Thats so adorable...its like a mini fairty tale^^...Write more or face the consequences of death!*shakes fist*..lol...no seriously..write more!!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha! I loved it. It's great. I mostly read Inu/Kag stuff, but I really like this 1. Write more soon.
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.2: AWWWW! How Cute! Alright, I'm hooked. I'll be back for more!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I still really liking it, but one thing (PLEASE DO NOT GET OFFENDED!!!!! I have to say this so people don't think I'm putting down their stories) Maybe you should break up individual dialog. Everything is to bunch together. ( Now, remember this is only a suggestion...it's your story do what you will).....keep it coming ......update soon
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i likd it continue please!
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June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
thats a great story!!!! i give it five sars!!!!! plz make more of it!!!