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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Still interesting .....write more so I can give you a better review....
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June 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
its great i want u to make the next chapter ASAP!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think I meant to review Ch. 3 & 4 last time. N-E-Wayz...Ch.5 & Ch. 6 are luffly! I'm really interested in the whole Inuyasha Kikyo memory, great bit of bait dangled there! So, Sess likes Rin even though she's "not the mystery girl!" Yeay! Keep it up! I'm starting to really enjoy this!
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quick question! Why did Inuyasha get grounded after Kikyo cheated on him, and why was Kikyo in Inuyasha's family's house with some stranger anyway? Just curious, or maybe I just missed something....I'll go back and re-read, but still.....? And was this Inuyasha's memory, or Sess's memory?
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June 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
-K- nevermind the last comment! I re-read and figures out that I had somehow skipped like an entire paragraph! oops! Questions answered!
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June 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the fanfiction; it touched me deeply. Please update chapter 6 as soon as possible.
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June 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
plz finish the story its just great so update asap
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story its great!!!!!! i hope that u finish it!!!!
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June 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't wait to see what happens when she tells sesshomaru and the others and why does it seem like she's scared to tell them???
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June 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ch.4 & Ch.5 still cute, but I'm noticing that the story seems really rushed. The flow is choppy and abrupt. Perhaps some character development and some description may fill it out. For example, the reader knows nothing about Sess except his name and that he his popular. What do you think? Please! Keep going though!