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for Bad Puppies Never Prosper

by CerealKiller

person emily
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
please continue i loved the firt chapter.
person kiitty cat
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome story but u haven't up dated in a very long time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person Emmi
schedule July 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome story!!!!!!!!!! Cannot wait to see what happens next!!!!!! Keep it up and hope to see an update soon!!!!!!!
10/10
person Megan Consoer
schedule June 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person blood-red
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YES, you must continue this story and i loved your 'whaty yasha doesn't know' story. please update and continue this story. update soon and often!

*blood-red
person Marigold
schedule June 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohhhhhhhhhhhhhh...

Pwetty... Wewwy pwetty... Hehoumawu wia evial himile ihs wevvy pwetty...

Yumi_Fan: She was babysitting, I think it got to her mind...

Marigold: Afinatlee.

Yumi_Fan: She was meant to say, Definatly... At the beggaining she said Pretty, very pretty, Sesshoumaru with evil smile is very pretty. I think she meant hot...

Marigold: Hawk?

Yumi_Fan: Unnnnnnn... Ya... I'm sslloowwllyy leaving now...

Margold: Hawk! Hawk! Hawk!

Yumi_Fan: Ya... Well, I better go now, considering...

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Yumi_Fan: Ya...

Marigold: Me of htowy. Me wanna hee uphatty!!! *Gurgles*

Yumi_Fan: She meant to say, I love this story, I want to see an update... I think...

Marigold:

Sincerely,
Mawiold and Werhon..

P.S Marigold and Person... Person is me, Yumi_Fan...
person kaisgirl112
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
well, well, well......what have we hear my friend? hehe u beta do another chappie that beta not be it! *glare* lol buuuuut anyways it was good! i was thinking for a minute that she got raped O.0 but then i thopught u wouldnt write about that.............RIGHT???? lol anywasy great chappie luvin it keep up da gud work wench!
person Anon
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!!!!

i do hope that makes a point....

YAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person PJ
schedule June 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Cool chapter please do continue this story.
person krystl
schedule June 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I liked it, really. And i would love to hear how Sesshomaru makes Inuyasha pay, i hope that i find it to be humiliating and all that good stuff. Please write more or i will cry, and than read someone else's fan fics. Bye.

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