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for The Poison of Erised

by Vyncent

person sel
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Iiieeee....Sessho get your ass tro kagome now!!!!!

OMg this is so exciting, I can't wait to see what happens next.

Sel~
person Ookami K..
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow vincent this was jammin.... Sorry I don't review every chapter but time is hardly on my side. Anyways I love the fic it is just so you... You do outstanding work on your stories though I did notice a few minor spelling errors but other than that I love it..... Its so dark and deep that it makes you really think.... Again great chapter I hope Kagome sides with Sesshoumaru even if he did go about the potion and mating all wrong. It would give her a sense of peace and love that she had never known before while watching the hanyou sit back on his ill choices. Until next time. Peace
person tinnueth
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I absolutly love this story!!! i usually dont read to many sess/kag and i hate sess/rin, that paring just doesnt seem right to me cuz from what i can tell from the show, he considers her more of a daughter than anything. I love how you descrobe everything. i have been trying to write and i can never get a begining going! I really hope you update soon!!!!! i cant wait to see what happens when the gang sees them together.
person Megan Consoer
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person selbabybye@comcast.net
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am LOVING THIS STORY!!!!!!

so can't wait for more!

*love, Sel*

*waits patiently like*
person sendosha
schedule August 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I have read the whole story in almost 3 hours and now I need a cold shower (by the way I´m a girl). Great lemons and interesting developements. You made Inuyasha a real asshole, *snicker*, I like that. Kagome needs a real man like Sesshoumaru *drool*. I´m looking forward for the next chapter.
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person Kokuei
schedule August 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story and yes the plot is thickening. Will Kagome ever find out what's going on with her?
person Megan Consoer
schedule August 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
person monecque
schedule August 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Don't stop writing this story I like it alot.
I am hooked you see.
the more I read of the story the more i want to read.
I try to keep up with all my fav. writers but it is hard.
so i check every week or so to see if anyone has updated.
Your stories are wonderful and I am so glad that you write them.