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for The Poison of Erised

by Vyncent

person amy
schedule May 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update soon! please! please!
person Sarah
schedule May 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey names Sarah.... i wanted to let you know. Your story is amazing. And i'm heading to bed its to late for me to read anymore. I will read more when i have time. I love how you make it more exciting each moment. But i wanted to point out in your dictionaries that you did not add onagei i think it is. I mean i know what it is, it's please right. I mean i am taking japanese. But others might no know. I mean the more dense readers lol.. jk... And sorry to be so rude. But are you 50 years old. Because you said something about 50 plus i was kinda shocked and needed to know.

And i know what it's like when people critisize your stories, and you intelligence. It's happened to me also.

I agree on flaming it can help you inprove. But when another critisize's your intelligence, and the story thats danm right rude. You had every right to yell at her.

Anyway i'm off to bed. so far its good, and i'm enjoying it. Keep updating after i finish these chapters if it's not finished already.

Sarah
person Dianna
schedule January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
plz update soon!!!!=)
person labelle
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i love it so much i can't get enough
person Snowfall
schedule January 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an excellent fic. I read it all the way through. Well written, suspense, angst, mystery, action, hot steamy sex. You've got it all. I don't quite get Inuyasha though. He's such an idiot. Well, I anxiously await the next chappie.

Snowfall
person Rinseternalsoul
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I almost feel sorry for Inuyasha. Poor guy just opened a can of realization and found out that it tastes pretty bitter. Sesshomaru is being so loving and supportive. It just gives me a warm and fuzzy feeling. I hope that Kagome can pull through this and see that her taiyoukai, though originally misguided, has come to care very deeply for her. 'Too bad Inuyasha. You snooze, you lose.' On a personal note... I hope you had a great holiday season, and I send my well-wishes for your continued physical improvement. It was nice to log on, after three days of trying to figure out what my daughter did to destroy my internet connection, and find that you had a nice long update waiting for me. Thanks!

Rinseternalsoul
person sendosha
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
There is no other author who tortures his readers more. Please have mercy and give us at least a few answers. I must admit, you know how to keep your readers, great job!
person demonlordlover
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
yes...another chappie!!! *jumps for joy*

I had first found this on singlespark and had almost died of a heart attack when it went down.

Then I found your posts on here and recovered. Now, I just have to wait it out for the updates....

Totally worth it!
person Inurin
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am enthralled with the detail and research you have done to write this book. You have captured the essence of the characters and have expanded their scope in a way that thrills any Inuyasha fan base. I appauld your sense of adventure into the souls of these deep creatures, delving into their psyci and into their most personal spaces. I am most anxious to read your other works, but very much look forward in continuing the reading of this amazing piece of literature.

I am also most interested in understanding more about your injury. I am involved in orthopaedics and have much knowledge in this area, hope I might be able to help or shed light on your path to health once more. It would be the least I could do to offer thanks for bringing such a gift of your writing to this poor soul!

May the blessings of Kami smile upon you and your loved ones.

Inurin
person celticicegoddess
schedule January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
milady, i bow to your wisdom. i have fully enjoyed this tory and i hope you update when ever your knee feels better. i wont push you, b/c my gma is having her own problems and i know how long it takes her to recover. i hope you feel better and hope you update. I hope to find out that kagome is pregnant and that is how sesshomaru gets her out of this depression thingy. that would be awesome. ttfn.peace. and happy new year and whatever holiday you celebrate.