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for The Poison of Erised

by Vyncent

person Knight2
schedule July 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hmm, I'm waiting to see what happens next. I hope new chapter comes soon.
schedule July 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, I could have sworn that I had already been reviewing this fic, but apparently I was only doing so in my imagination, and for that I ask your forgiveness.

Now that my brain has been switched to the "on" position once more, I want to tell you that I am really enjoying this story. I love the odd turns that things are taking and the amount of questions without answers is enough to drive me to distraction! I do hope to see more chapters up and coming.
person bayusandiw
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you made inuyasha such a wimp and outrageous sharp-tongued demon(or half-demon) in this one fic... isn't that a contradiction... for that i declare you meanie... ^_^.
off-stage/after play: "kagome please forgive me, it's in the script!!" "that's allright inuyasha, let's hit the ice cream parlour shall we ^-^ " "I want ramen '_' "
person Anon
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i dont know if its just me or does the demon whem who the witch made the potion for originaly sound like how kagome looks when shes wit shessy???
is she realated some how to the demon??? if the potion has the ability to hurt kagome wont sessh do something about it??? and now a that they know that shes being contralld y wount sessh show himself???
i love this story its really good please keep the updates coming ^^
person Ookami K
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Loved it keep going I want no I need more....
person demonqueen
schedule July 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far. Question-does Sesshomaru really love and care about Kagome or is she just a tool to satisfy his lust and cause shame and hurt to Inuyasha.
person Sel
schedule July 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
"Yep...that's me...*Evil Grin* HEH! HEH! HEH! " *giggles* indeed...

I am curious if kagome is subconciously aware of her and sesshy's activities..and her hunger/lust.
Or one or the other anyways.. I wonder because of her gifting him his arm...*ponders*
Evil evil *winks*

Can't wait for more *sits patriently......squirms alittle, then sits still again*

<3
Sel~
person Ookami K.
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just loved this story..... Another of your better works. Anyways, update soon...
person Knight2
schedule July 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I feel bad about what's going to happen to Inuyasha, Sesshomaru isn't a nice guy.

Well, I'm waiting for next chapter.
person Sel
schedule July 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh so evil......leaveing one hanging on an If...
*sighs*...I am patient...I can wait....

*wonders to whom the watcher might be....could it be inuyasha? Though I would think he would have attacked by now, then again if it is him, maybe he is not as stupid as I sometimes believe him to be...*ponders of this and more*

Sel~